It is very good. The vocabulary is good and i liked the way you set it out like a postcard. But you could included were you stayed and if it was good or not.
It is very good. The vocabulary is good and I like the way you set it out like a postcard. But you could have included where you stayed and if you liked it or not.
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It is very good. The vocabulary is good and i liked the way you set it out like a postcard. But you could included were you stayed and if it was good or not.
It is very good. The vocabulary is good and I like the way you set it out like a postcard. But you could have included where you stayed and if you liked it or not.
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