Cher Mme Newbold, Je suis allée en France. J’ai voyagé en bus. Il fait chaud. J’ai regardé la télé et j’ai fait les magasins. J’ai acheté chocolat. Je suis allée au parc d’attractions. C’était super!
Pramestha
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* You have described your holiday in France well.(well done Prei!) *You added all the correct accents and you used the perfect tense. - You could have added something else such as what you drank or ate or you could have said that you ate your chocolate after you ate it.
2 comments:
* You have described your holiday in France well.(well done Prei!)
*You added all the correct accents and you used the perfect tense.
- You could have added something else such as what you drank or ate or you could have said that you ate your chocolate after you ate it.
MECD
* I think your description of your holiday was great!!!
* You described everything you did very well.
- You could have added some pictures maybe, but other than that well done.
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