Cher Mme Newbold, Je suis allée en Dorset. J’ai voyagé en camper van. J’ai joué sur la gameboy et écouté de la musique. J’ai vu ‘Mr Bean’s Holiday’ et ‘Evan Almighty’, ils étaient drôles. Je suis allé â la plage, il étains grand.
RMyers-Cann
2 comments:
I like the way you say you went in a camper van, and that you say you whatched Mr Bean and Evan Almighty.
but you could have said more about what you saw
ABlakemore
It was very good but your not a girl Rory , even if you did wear sophies jewlery . You put to e's insted of just one e on alle .
E Rees
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