Salut Madame Newbold,
Dans mes vacances je suis allé à Londre. J'ai resté un hotel. J'ai visité la Londre International Moteur Exposition. C'èst fantastique. Je suis allé avec ma mère, mon père et ma soeur. Le soir je suis allé au théâtre.
Au revoir
Arnie
2 comments:
*I liked that you wrote about the motorshow.
*You had good spelling
~*You could have written a bit more.
RMC
* You described everything well.
* I liked that you wrote a lot about what you did.
- You could have given more information but everything else was good!
PKS
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